Second Draft

Here is my second draft of my media text.I have over viewed my teacher’s feedback and made some changes which I believe are relevant and will make my narrative make more sense. 

I got a few random students to watch my video and they gave me there feedback on how they understand the narrative better as it is displayed clearly. I have sent this off to my teachers to review on, so they can give further feedback on what I can develop more and and make it better. 

Audience Feedback

I have handed out a few questionnaires to get feedback from my music video. I will be getting feedback of my teacher too, but I wanted a wider range audience to watch my video and give me there views and opinions on it. Furthermore I can develop further from looking at peoples suggestions on what I can do to improve and what is good and bad about my music video.