Here is my second draft of my media text.I have over viewed my teacher’s feedback and made some changes which I believe are relevant and will make my narrative make more sense.
I got a few random students to watch my video and they gave me there feedback on how they understand the narrative better as it is displayed clearly. I have sent this off to my teachers to review on, so they can give further feedback on what I can develop more and and make it better.
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